2007年4月10日 星期二
Solve problems by ourselves
When confronting problems, we often ask others for help at first. But I think that the most important thing we should do first is trying to deal with problems by ourselves. With doing it, we can become mature. Correspondingly, if we love someone, we can't replace him or her to deal with any problem but provide a little help at the adequate time. And then he or she can grow to maturity.
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Hellow, I'm Chengyan Wang.After reading your reflection,I can't agree with you anymore because your opinion similar with me.Anyway your writing is good.
Hi! I'm Honda. I have the same opinion as you have. We should not rely on others all the time. We shall be more independent.
I think you can use 'help' to replace the "replace" in the 6 line. I think using "replace" is a little strange. But your article is still very good.
Being independent is more important than we think. I believe that someday we can live independent,too.
Hello, I am Tracy. I also think your ideas is meaningful. When I meet problem, I always ask others to help me. But just like you say, we should learn to help ourselves to deal the problem.
I also agree with honda's suggestion. It's not easy to understand "replace" in that sentence. If you change "replace" to "help" or "give them a hand", which would make all article more smoothly.
I can feel your writing is improving. Well done.
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